Chip Label Design Feedback (2 Viewers)

[chamber2skipped]

I hired someone to design a custom chip label based on a casino that was around in the 50s in Waldorf, MD, and I'm looking for feedback before the revision window closes. Any thoughts or suggestions would be appreciated.

 

[Machine]

The text on the top is 1) too large / bold and 2) I don't really like location text there or anything above the image.

 

[Wifey]

The wigwam in the blank space of the A is not going to show up the way you want it to. The labels are too small for that intricate of a detail.
I would say just remove it. But if you don't want to do that, then consider changing it to the teal colour of the band in the headdress.
I would also consider making your denoms a different colour to stand out just a touch more. Maybe the red in the headband?

 

[kmccormick100]

Those denoms should be about 50% bigger to be decently legible too. I'd print these out at 100% scale to get an idea of how they'll look

 

[Colquhoun]

You may just want to move around and scale the items that you already have, just a little differently. Maybe something like this:

 

[chamber2skipped]

While I like that design I had to go with the earlier design. Here's what I ended up with. Let me know what you all think.

 

[RagingAZN]

Ultimately they are your chips and since you’ve already finalised them, our opinions don’t mean anything but I concur with what the others have said.

I like location to be on the bottom and denoms should be centred and bigger as that is the most important part on a denominated chip. Overall though its a nice design, could be really really nice with a few tweaks.

What chips are you putting them on?

 

[chamber2skipped]

Yeah, unfortunately I only had a couple of revisions available with the fiverr artist. I'm considering putting them on some of the hybrid web molds that are available in the group buy.

 

[doublebooyah85]

I like it! Don’t mind the denom location but the city being on top is super odd.

 

[KingZilla]

I love the design mockup by @Colquhoun !
But I like your original design as well. It seems your "Chief" will be slightly larger on the original design and I like it when the main image is the focus of a design. Perhaps make the word WIGWAM slightly smaller and enlarge the Chief just a bit more?

 

[chamber2skipped]

I like it! Don’t mind the denom location but the city being on top is super odd.

That's the one thing I do like about the design. Highlights the history of the city more.

 

[NotRealNameNoSir]

Yeah, unfortunately I only had a couple of revisions available with the fiverr artist. I'm considering putting them on some of the hybrid web molds that are available in the group buy.

Hey, I love that you're going to a designer but I don't like the idea of having a set number of revisions. That's a recipe for you being unsatisfied with the final product. I had @mattross1313 do 164 versions before pulling the trigger.

 

[chamber2skipped]

I love the design mockup by @Colquhoun !
But I like your original design as well. It seems your "Chief" will be slightly larger on the original design and I like it when the main image is the focus of a design. Perhaps make the word WIGWAM slightly smaller and enlarge the Chief just a bit more?

If I could get the city/state moved to the top with that design it would be ideal, but I don't have the skills to do it myself. It would also be cool to have the denoms colored the same as the chip in those. I guess you could just do white for $100.

 

[Machine]

If I could get the city/state moved to the top with that design it would be ideal, but I don't have the skills to do it myself. It would also be cool to have the denoms colored the same as the chip in those. I guess you could just do white for $100.

Did you ask @Colquhoun what he might charge to help you with what you have? His 'fees' are criminally low imo, he has a lot of experience!

Here is the most recent thing he helped me with...

My version of the horse race game, he did all the design and graphics for me, turned out perfect!

He also did the art work on the mix games plaques for the community

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[chamber2skipped]

Those look really nice.

 

[allforcharity]

You will need extra blank space around the edges to allow for print tolerances