I tend to agree with you, the outline needs to be much slimmer. It becomes cartoonlike with so much silhouette. It's mostly trying to tweak things in the Cricut Design Space that is clunky. I'm working on it.I like this as a stand alone button, it's beautiful. But the black/white around the actual font makes it "look" much more chunky than it is. I love how thin the "mirage" is on the chips, and the original matches perfectly...these almost look like a different font even though its the same.
Beautiful button, without a doubt, but the originals are the GOAT so far for me.