Those look like
CPC templates. If so am I correct in assuming .875" in size? I think in general you've done great. Some thoughts:
- At such a small size I'd be concerned about some fine lines not printing properly, especially on the darker shades. The lines in your dollar signs in the outer ring, the lines in "JPR", etc. Those fonts might be better off being solid.
- Am I seeing small details outside the red line...dollar signs or something? Likely those will not reproduce well, or get cut off. One other thought, the closer you have things to the edge, the harder it is the eye to correct for inaccurate die cutting of the inlays. Again, if these are for CPC chips they are pretty accurate, but die cutting is hard, and variances occur.
- That argyle pattern - looks great but all printing processes handle transparency different. Best bet is to double check with the manufacturer on how that will look.
- As you know proofs are a key part of the process. Emphasizing that here.
If you have some Q's or want to chat, PM me and we can discuss some more.