Opinions on these simplified logos before order? (1 Viewer)

[Rome]

Irrespective of the chips selected, I needed to simplify my logo before the order for a set of ceramics. I started with this one which is was very busy for the size of the label area

I tried a few different ways to simplify the logo while keeping some of the design elements. Which one works better between the three? I could remove the laurel wreath entirely, but I'm not sure what to add to the design to keep it interesting. Very open to suggestions! Thanks!

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[nauseant]

I really like how busy your original one is to be fair, it's got a nice balance

I'd stick with that and maybe make the black lines between the feathers and intricate details thicker to allow for a better print. Maybe even lessen the amount of feathers within the same space.

 

[MeridianFC]

I really like how busy your original one is to be fair, it's got a nice balance

I'd stick with that and maybe make the black lines between the feathers and intricate details thicker to allow for a better print. Maybe even lessen the amount of feathers within the same space.

Oddly I agree