Well - let me say - you asked.
I love the Inlay, the colors, the theme, , the background color and printing, the overall look, it is a great manipulation of negative space.
(for me - I might be in the minority - but I normally dont like a cursive or script style of font. Although, the font you are using is that not that much of a cursive font - its just me - I have difficulty reading cursive - when all the letters are connected)
Now - to the edge spots.
This is where I like to challenge people. Since these are being printed, you do not have to stick to the old trope of Edge spot progression, no extra costs exists to use less boring edge spots patterns.
Expand your choices, make use of that materials and technology that is being used. You can use more interesting Edge Spots, once reserved for high value chips. Also you can pick different combinations of colors for the edge spots. like the 8V for example, in the Paulson builder it is built with 2 different colors - well again, because of the technology being used to make these chips you can pick 4 colors if you want. The balance and locations of these edge spots is essentially unlimited with the choice and color combos. If the CPC or Paulson builder only allows a limited number or choices of color options on a chip - that does not mean you are limited - you can include many different color options and locations.
These are for you -so the choice is yours (but once you get these - you have them - so make them the best you can right now)
Anyway - this is my feedback - as I like to say - Your Mileage may vary.